http://new-new-dagon.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] new-new-dagon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jalynski_november_18 2016-12-03 07:32 am (UTC)

Здесь у нас по-иному,

Не вписывается в ритм стиха.
Измените на ""Здесь Всё по- иному"" будет лучше.
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